Nexyras

is creating Fantasy story with illustrations
                                                                                            
Abouth
Hi, I am currently writing my own fantasy story called Forsaken: Sound of a New Era.
It may not be the final name but right now, I have to call it somehow so I tried to make it accurate to the story, to sound good, but not to exaggerate it too much.

I write and draw slowly, mainly because I redo over and over everything I do to make sure I am satisfied with the results. I am also not a native speaker so I would appreciate any checkups of my english for mistakes, tho I want to make up some words of my own for the story.


I'll post peaces of the story here and there, when I'll have some. The same goes for the drawings. I might also post some unused content if interested.



First chapter

Here's a showcase of what I have already finished,... mostly. I have more, but it's not ready to get out yet.





“Hey! Wake up Hecate!”
“Gosh!”
“We're here! …”


Hecate wakes up and scratches his head while stretching. He’s a black crusader in full armour, with a large two handed sword strangely tied up with chains. It's impossible to tell what he looks like or which race he belongs to. He calmly looks at his companion who keeps talking…

“Do u always have to sleep on the way?!”

Hecate stands up and stretches one more time while saying:

“Why can’t u rest from time to time Oeone?”

Oeone belongs to a Camillie race. She has a black skin without fur or scales and big pointy ears. Even though Camillies have a tough skin, Oeone wears a steel plate armour on her chest with some plate boots. She has weirdly curved sword with some onehanded steel claws as a weapon.

Oeone crossed her arms and got a bit upset.

“I’m not tired or anything!”
“And It's not my fault u can't take this seriously!”


“Calm down, I'm awake."
"It's not like we're in a hurry so what's your deal?"
"Being hasty doesn't suit me anyway.”


Says Hecate a bit irritated while grabbing his stuff and slowly exiting the carriage. Then he throws a small bag of supplies to the coachman.

“Thanks for the ride. Here's your payment, as u wanted.”

Coachman didn't say anything, he slowly nodded and took his leave just after Oeone got out of the carriage. They both stand in front of an enormous mountain passage. The passage is steep on both sides and runs through a huge mountains, deeply buried into the rock.

Oeone catches up with Hecate by hopping and asks curiously, seeming no longer upset.

“Say, do u think we'll find it?“

“Can't say…”

Speaks Hecate while scratching his head again.

“I have never saw emergence of one myself.”
“But we still need to get through the passage first.”


“New era link opening...”
“Do I say it right?”


Oenone looks up to the sky and puts a finger on her lips.

“What about 'Sound of a New Era!', that sounds much cooler!”

Hecate laughs a little and looks at Oeone.

“Well that’s stupid, don’t u think?”
"Anyway, we have a long route ahead of us and u know we can't stay after the sunset."
"Don't get lost again, alright?"


“Hey, that's mean!”
“That’s one hell of a huge mountain passage Hecate!!”
“Everyone could get lost inside!”


Hecate laughs friendly again and waves at Oeone to follow him while walking into the passage. Oeone catches up with him in a moment, after she finished eyeing the passage suspiciously.



As usual, they talk about their stories and other things about themselves for the whole time, with Oeone trying to force Hecate into playing some game along the way.


After a half day long journey, they get to an edge of a chasm intersecting through the passage from left and leading along it all the way to the end. There’s only a narrow side path on the right side of the chasm.
All of sudden, Oeone stops.

“Hmm..?”
“We don't have time for games, what's the matter Oe?”


Asks Hecate in surprise. Oeone closes her eyes and tries to concentrate as much as possible while Hecate grasps his sword. Ready to unsheath his weapon, Hecate slowly looks around for anything suspicious. After a while he asks Oeone.


"Take your time if u need, but I could use a hint, you know."

Oeone concentrates a while longer before she finally looks at Hecate and answers.

"Sorry Hecate, this is strange."
"It's a residue of a Link and should be somewhere ahead of us"
"The problem is, that Links shouldn't be able to decompose, once they appear."


Links are enlarging gateways between realities which in the end turns into a Splits. It takes hundreds of years before such Link enlarges enough. Splits leads to destabilization and change of physical laws to the state of disruption of the worlds.

"I see where this is going… alright, let's check it out, It's along the road anyway."
                                                                                            
Abouth
Hi, I am currently writing my own fantasy story called Forsaken: Sound of a New Era.
It may not be the final name but right now, I have to call it somehow so I tried to make it accurate to the story, to sound good, but not to exaggerate it too much.

I write and draw slowly, mainly because I redo over and over everything I do to make sure I am satisfied with the results. I am also not a native speaker so I would appreciate any checkups of my english for mistakes, tho I want to make up some words of my own for the story.


I'll post peaces of the story here and there, when I'll have some. The same goes for the drawings. I might also post some unused content if interested.



First chapter

Here's a showcase of what I have already finished,... mostly. I have more, but it's not ready to get out yet.





“Hey! Wake up Hecate!”
“Gosh!”
“We're here! …”


Hecate wakes up and scratches his head while stretching. He’s a black crusader in full armour, with a large two handed sword strangely tied up with chains. It's impossible to tell what he looks like or which race he belongs to. He calmly looks at his companion who keeps talking…

“Do u always have to sleep on the way?!”

Hecate stands up and stretches one more time while saying:

“Why can’t u rest from time to time Oeone?”

Oeone belongs to a Camillie race. She has a black skin without fur or scales and big pointy ears. Even though Camillies have a tough skin, Oeone wears a steel plate armour on her chest with some plate boots. She has weirdly curved sword with some onehanded steel claws as a weapon.

Oeone crossed her arms and got a bit upset.

“I’m not tired or anything!”
“And It's not my fault u can't take this seriously!”


“Calm down, I'm awake."
"It's not like we're in a hurry so what's your deal?"
"Being hasty doesn't suit me anyway.”


Says Hecate a bit irritated while grabbing his stuff and slowly exiting the carriage. Then he throws a small bag of supplies to the coachman.

“Thanks for the ride. Here's your payment, as u wanted.”

Coachman didn't say anything, he slowly nodded and took his leave just after Oeone got out of the carriage. They both stand in front of an enormous mountain passage. The passage is steep on both sides and runs through a huge mountains, deeply buried into the rock.

Oeone catches up with Hecate by hopping and asks curiously, seeming no longer upset.

“Say, do u think we'll find it?“

“Can't say…”

Speaks Hecate while scratching his head again.

“I have never saw emergence of one myself.”
“But we still need to get through the passage first.”


“New era link opening...”
“Do I say it right?”


Oenone looks up to the sky and puts a finger on her lips.

“What about 'Sound of a New Era!', that sounds much cooler!”

Hecate laughs a little and looks at Oeone.

“Well that’s stupid, don’t u think?”
"Anyway, we have a long route ahead of us and u know we can't stay after the sunset."
"Don't get lost again, alright?"


“Hey, that's mean!”
“That’s one hell of a huge mountain passage Hecate!!”
“Everyone could get lost inside!”


Hecate laughs friendly again and waves at Oeone to follow him while walking into the passage. Oeone catches up with him in a moment, after she finished eyeing the passage suspiciously.



As usual, they talk about their stories and other things about themselves for the whole time, with Oeone trying to force Hecate into playing some game along the way.


After a half day long journey, they get to an edge of a chasm intersecting through the passage from left and leading along it all the way to the end. There’s only a narrow side path on the right side of the chasm.
All of sudden, Oeone stops.

“Hmm..?”
“We don't have time for games, what's the matter Oe?”


Asks Hecate in surprise. Oeone closes her eyes and tries to concentrate as much as possible while Hecate grasps his sword. Ready to unsheath his weapon, Hecate slowly looks around for anything suspicious. After a while he asks Oeone.


"Take your time if u need, but I could use a hint, you know."

Oeone concentrates a while longer before she finally looks at Hecate and answers.

"Sorry Hecate, this is strange."
"It's a residue of a Link and should be somewhere ahead of us"
"The problem is, that Links shouldn't be able to decompose, once they appear."


Links are enlarging gateways between realities which in the end turns into a Splits. It takes hundreds of years before such Link enlarges enough. Splits leads to destabilization and change of physical laws to the state of disruption of the worlds.

"I see where this is going… alright, let's check it out, It's along the road anyway."

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