This tutorial comes courtesy of episode 161 and 162 of The Taylor Stevens Show. It's part 1 and 2 of what will likely be a 4 episode series in which we line edit a segment of Steve's work in progress.
In this tutorial we learn:
~~ What is/ isn't "mindreading" that results in hopping POV perspectives.
~~ How to strengthen a paragraph by keeping description/ character opinion/ plot points flowing in sequential order.
~~ How to organize information within a paragraph to eliminate unnecessary words.
~~ Subtle changes that strengthen action beats.
~~ What weak vs. strong verbs look like in a practical sense.
~~ How to add/ create inner dialogue to avoid a sequence reading like a dialogue transcript.
~~ How small word tweaks and alternative word choices can change the feel of a paragraph.
~~ We also learn that, while I'm perfectly capable of distinguishing between "redundant" and "repetitious" in real life, my mouth is too much of a dummy to get it right while creating a tutorial. If nothing else, the frequent mistake makes for a good drinking game. ;)
~~ And there's a bonus post-session discussion between Steve and I that isn't included in the podcasts and can only be found in this tutorial.