Machineborn: FIRST PUBLIC PLAYTEST!!!

This post contains the PDF for the first public playtest of Machineborn. This document contains sampled information from the Action Manual and the Character Manual. It's a work in progress and everything is subject to change. Things I'm looking to get answered with this playtest is:

(1) What aspects of the game works and what doesn't work? Please elaborate on why it doesn't work and how you'd suggest it change.

(2) What information is missing or superfluous? If you think something should be added or removed from the game, please elaborate on why you think it should.

(3) What's problematic or offensive? I aim to be respectful in my writing, but I'm only a single person who may be blind to or ignorant of certain perspectives. If I've written something problematic or offensive, I want to learn from that and see how it can be improved. Please be as elaborate as possible on why you think it's problematic and how you'd suggest it change.

(4) What's poorly written? I'm not looking minor writing errors and poor grammar right now since fixing those are continuous during the writing process. I'm looking for feedback on sections of text that are difficult to understand because it's poorly written or because it needs elaborations or explanations. 

You can send your feedback through any of the following channels:

Discord: Ekorren#6152

Twitter: @ekorrenhj

Youtube: Ekorren: Roleplaying & Worldbuilding

Patreon: Ekorren

By sending me playtesting feedback, you agree that I can use your feedback as I deem appropriate for the game without crediting you personally. Instead, I could list you as a playtester in the credits page if you want to as thanks for your feedback, even if I don’t make any direct changes to accommodate it.

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