Ch 2: Another Chick in the Mall - Page 8

Still running a bit behind schedule so this page was finished on the day it was meant to be released and I couldn't post it early, not sure when we're going to catch up since the colorist is swamped with commissions at the moment.

I'm not a huge fan of this page, I don't like how the last few frames were formatted and I know I could have done better but it was too late to fix them by the time I realized that. I should have had Coach actually showing in the last frame to show his "stop repeating me" reaction, with Suzie distractedly staring ahead. There's a lot of empty space too and just- yeah I don't like it :[ Oh well. Too late now.

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