Arc 5 Page 8 Revision
I really want to finish the arc 5 revisions ASAP, so I'm trying to do about 1 a day! This page, as you can, got a major overhaul in both art and narrative. Still wordy, but hopefully fits better, explains some other stuff a bit better, and cuts unimportant bits. And the art doesn't like break a ton a comic rules anymore, and there's room for the words! And stuff! AMAZING WHAT YOU LEARN AFTER A FEW YEARS GUYS.