Drop-Out, page 95
it was very tempting to make her say "closure for whom" instead of for who.

anyway, the tail-end of this page's conversation was originally in the night scene of the abandoned house, regarding "hurting everyone", where lola says she should be the one to decide if she was hurt or not.
i changed it for various reasons like the focus of the conversation in that scene, and a more assertive take toward personal autonomy fit lola's mentality at this point in the trip better.


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