Paid for by patrons
The First Run Episode One
A new adventure from the worlds of Star Citizen. Sorri Lyrax experiences her first delivery job in this episodic story by Thomas K. Carpenter. I'm experimenting with adding music (my own, but please excuse the quality, I only had a couple of hours to put it together). Is beginning and ending with it too much or just right? Does it dovetail appropriately or does the fade in/out take too long/short? Is the style appropriate? Should there be any music at all? Tell me what you think in the comments below.