I wrote a short story
 
You might know that I've been dabbling in writing. Still polishing my novel, but I just wrote a short story and thought why not share it? 

I would love to hear your thoughts, if you feel like reading it. 

Ohh, and proofreading would be massively appreciated. If you spot any mistakes or feel like something could be re-worded better, that would be very useful. 

Attached in both word and pdf (word if you want to leave any comments).

I ended up having a long conversation about the meaning of it with my sister, would love to hear what other people think. :)

:S *anxious* *first time sharing my writing*