As promised for the $200 Patreon incentive, here is part 1 of me reading and cringing my way through one of the earliest existing drafts of Castoff: the 2011 National Novel Writing Month version!
Part 1 covers the events that eventually became chapter 1 of the comic. Part 2 and onward will cover everything after that. I'm not sure how many parts this will be in total! It depends on how much rambling I do.
I did not end up doing a full dramatic reading, because that would take forever: instead I read some parts, skimmed through others, and generally tried to keep it brief. It still ended up being 20 minutes long. ...I'll work on my brevity for future parts.