So if you guys remember, I've been working with the artist who made this:
Along with the previous artist who did all the work on the avatars to try decide which artist does the better work.
That being said, the second artist just tweaked his initial drawing's face to make it look a bit better and less childish.
We'd love to get some critiques on it, so we can send it back to him with a list of tweaks for the final cut.
Note: The shading hasn't been added yet, so it will look significantly better, plus a few other minor tweaks. We also plan on having the eye color changed to something more subtle (suggestions on that would be great), and don't mind the fact he's wearing no shirt, that'll come after. :P Or who knows, we might make a shirtless outfit (with a more detailed body drawing).
All help is appreciated.