In this entire story, I noticed something - I am missing a crucial part of the story, that every well-respecting LiS fanfic would have done.
Max is not sitting down and reflecting on the past few minutes, while beautiful moving shots of characters are seen. I could not stand for that, so I wrote a scene that makes up for a lot, having her reflect on a few years of her time with Chloe, instead of the last few moments. Honestly, in the game, that was one of my favorite parts. Moments of reflection is a very meta thing to do in a game, and it's great when you need a recap of where you left off.