Page 13 Redux
Man, I can't believe I went through all of October (a.k.a. Inktober) without a real post! Well, I won't let it happen for November (a.k.a. Dinovember). Page 14 is partly done, but before I can release it, I need to do some revisions to page 13. Specifically, I was not happy with a few of the "acting choices", especially in the last panel. I've digitally revised them and I think it's an improvement.
Usually I post the English version since it's always done first, but I thought for once I'd post the French version, capably translated by volunteer Eric Loève. (I think I actually prefer the French version for this page.)