[Random Remarks] Poor Pony
Reading over the page proofs of TINKER, I find myself thinking over and over again "Poor Pony."  I just hit the fight with the Wyverns.  He has to be like "She was standing RIGHT THERE talking and then she's halfway across the city, fighting with three Wyverns!  WTF?  Why is she fighting with them?  HOW DID SHE GET THERE?!"