Real-Time Revision: Internal Questions with Brad Reed
 
In my rough drafting, I often have characters asking questions of themselves. In this week's real-time revision, I explore why this is probably not an authentic technique to show the inner thoughts of a character and how to revise it to make it work more effectively. Granted, this is more of a stylistic device than a "right vs. wrong" technique, but it's something to at least be aware of when you are writing and revising.

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