He sent me this pic, on the left, that he'd been working on using a new Wacom tablet, and while starting to learn Corel's Painter. He was having difficulty getting the pose right, and I agreed- it's awkward and not... dynamic, I guess.
After a heavy day in the shop, I was kind of looking for something relaxing to do, so I spent... well, a little too long cleaning it up. Tweaking this, redrawing that, a lot of "hum, that doesn't look right, what if I move it over here... Oh God! Undo! Undo!" :)
But, eventually, I thought the rework came out well. It's still never going to appear in a Marvel comic, and I still don't know how to properly fix the face- just not enough experience drawing regular people, y'know? :)
But still a fun exercise. I just don't do enough art-for-art's-sake type of stuff. :)