What sounds better?
 

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Option 1:

After I return to the phone, what is heard on the other end can only be described as all the most beautiful things in the world - flowers, puppies, butterflies, beer - turned into sound. Julia  had decided to sing while I was away from the phone, to pass the time, and was not yet done.

Option 2:

As I approach the phone I can hear Julia singing to pass the time. When she sings, it is as if all the most beautiful things in the world, such as flowers, puppies, butterflies, or peanut butter, are all combined into a beautiful voice.

Option 3:

As I leave the kitchen it comes to my attention that Julia has been singing to pass the time. When she sings it is as if flowers, puppies, butterflies, peanut butter - all beautiful things - have been combined into a beautiful voice.

Option 4:

It dawns on me that I still have Julia on the phone, to which I promptly return. I had expected to find that she'd hung up, or that she was angry with me, but apparently I'm no psychic. Instead, she was singing, and with a voice so warm God must have made it using all the most beautiful things in the world, such as flowers, butterflies, and peanut butter.}

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