Chapter 1 is complete and I love how its turned out! Thank you for helping me complete it and now we can move on to chapter 2. I've also shared the story on fictionpress.com for the purpose of more feedback from a 3rd party perspective. Thank you so much for all of the support, you guys are making this possible for me. <3

this is the story thus far, any feedback is helpful. Let me know if you guys think it flows well and what can be changed or improved. 

thank you guys again for all of the support, you guys really rock my world! crwLOVE